Too bad we can't afford an attorney like Mr Steele, as the Guardian of Justice in this story. Masterfully written and a joy to read. Since I am not an author I limit myself to comment exclusively on the aspects of a reader. In summation, it is always nice to see the conquest of good over evil. Unfortunately, this is rarely the case in real life. In spite of the lack of plausibility, I loved the outcome in this story. If a couple finds that they are losing interest in each other, they should discuss it and then seek counseling or separate and/or divorce or perhaps move into other arrangements.
- This ending to murphy621's original,"The Black Velvet Choker" corrects the unjust ending present in that first version.
- The heartless,cheating twat got exactly what she deserved,and Charlie and the kids were a happy family. (Nice to see Charlie trading UP to a sweet young hottie,too!)
- And the final evidence of justice being served,or KARMA,if you will,was having Miles getting his balls crushed! (Would have been nice to have known how!)
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Anonymous07/08/16
Utter bulllshit!
the author plagiarizes and writes a fantasy that only the BTB assholes can stomach!
Stop writing, asshole.
No forced implausible reconciliation and you slobber at the mouth in rage?
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Anonymous10/15/16
Write forever if you feel like it
The real guys and Gals love the outcome of disrespect!!!!
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Anonymous11/08/16
To Anon "Utter bulllshit!" ....
.... it must really suck (literally) to be a cheating WHORE wife apologist! So sad for you .... now it's time for you to return to your bedroom closet and wait for the "next" real man to service your wife.
Nothing better than a disrespectful cheating cum dumpster wife getting what she deserves.....
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Anonymous12/21/16
Nice Take
A good look at possible fallout to the party who acts in their own interest, with no real care or regard to the affect it has on others. The man got powerful legal representation and a judge that had probably seen one too many of these "bullshit" cases and ruled accordingly. Nice to see that "Miles" got just deserts in the end also. Enjoyed your story, thanks for sharing it.
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Anonymous02/07/17
Great recovery from a crappola story
Yes sometimes there is justice in this world and Q_L_P has given us a glimpse of what should happen to idiot fools. Love the crushed balls on Miles but for me a shotgun would have been a better solution.
Thanks for the new ending - I rest better at night knowing that real men exist.
English
Great fantasy
Too bad we can't afford an attorney like Mr Steele, as the Guardian of Justice in this story. Masterfully written and a joy to read. Since I am not an author I limit myself to comment exclusively on the aspects of a reader. In summation, it is always nice to see the conquest of good over evil. Unfortunately, this is rarely the case in real life. In spite of the lack of plausibility, I loved the outcome in this story. If a couple finds that they are losing interest in each other, they should discuss it and then seek counseling or separate and/or divorce or perhaps move into other arrangements.
A Rightful Result!
- This ending to murphy621's original,"The Black Velvet Choker" corrects the unjust ending present in that first version.
- The heartless,cheating twat got exactly what she deserved,and Charlie and the kids were a happy family. (Nice to see Charlie trading UP to a sweet young hottie,too!)
- And the final evidence of justice being served,or KARMA,if you will,was having Miles getting his balls crushed! (Would have been nice to have known how!)
Utter bulllshit!
the author plagiarizes and writes a fantasy that only the BTB assholes can stomach!
Stop writing, asshole.
Poor Anonymous
No forced implausible reconciliation and you slobber at the mouth in rage?
Write forever if you feel like it
The real guys and Gals love the outcome of disrespect!!!!
To Anon "Utter bulllshit!" ....
.... it must really suck (literally) to be a cheating WHORE wife apologist! So sad for you .... now it's time for you to return to your bedroom closet and wait for the "next" real man to service your wife.
Well done....
Nothing better than a disrespectful cheating cum dumpster wife getting what she deserves.....
Nice Take
A good look at possible fallout to the party who acts in their own interest, with no real care or regard to the affect it has on others. The man got powerful legal representation and a judge that had probably seen one too many of these "bullshit" cases and ruled accordingly. Nice to see that "Miles" got just deserts in the end also. Enjoyed your story, thanks for sharing it.
Great recovery from a crappola story
Yes sometimes there is justice in this world and Q_L_P has given us a glimpse of what should happen to idiot fools. Love the crushed balls on Miles but for me a shotgun would have been a better solution.
Thanks for the new ending - I rest better at night knowing that real men exist.
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