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So so
Among other things,if you are going to write an American story check on US wording.No american would say 'after we quarter time' they would sat 'at the end of the first quarter'.Likewise the wouldn't be 'irked',she would be pissed. This also lacked emotions,Jasmine isnt exactly on fire,so why does she let him sctew her?If this is to be a longer story,put chapters on it...
So now we now
Jasmine is just a cheap gutter slut.
Eddy is either in denial or a happy WACC
Nobody seems to respect Eddy even a little.
Liked It
But what a shit friend he turned out to be.
Disgusting
What a great wife and what a great friend. Just kill yourself.
Entertaining
A fresh approach to a hot wife tale (tail). Love the confidence of the hero, calling her bluff, ordering her to submit, knowing that behind the respectable front evey wife wants to feel a different cock in her. A real man and a real woman having fun. 5*****
Lucky
Lucky she's not my wife and lucky I found out that this hot looking broad was game for a revenge fuck whenever she was mad at the fool that married her.
Takes all kinds!
Cum to think about it, I could make her my secret and private slut, damn - life is good!
>betrayedbylove
No, the husband was doing fine in his rec room. Beat the shit out of the "friend" and kick the bitch to the curb.
flash story
a good flash story and ignore the trolls
Good flash
A good little bold flash story of a flash fuck. Hot! I expect she comes downstairs!
Ridiculous
In any case, the "trolls" are correct in deriding this tale.
Any guy put his hands on my wife or threatens her because
She is being "rude and obnoxious" will get a beat down from me. It's her house too and if she doesn't like having my friends over, that's her choice. She has every right to expect civility from my guests,if they don't like it then there's the door and don't let it hit you on the ass on the way out.
Dream On***
My women would have bust a cap in your ass. Thanks for sharing.
RE: Any guy put his hands on my wife or threatens her because
@Anonymous
It is funny that you think because it is your house, your wife has the right to be rude and your guests have to put up with that. Just tell them not to visit, or you have to respect them.
@anonymous
I get what you're saying but my comment was meant for the author.
HA HA HA HA HA
RE: Any guy put his hands on my wife or threatens her because
You sound like a "wimp" if your woman acts like an Idiot and you dont stop it PPL will just stop coming to your place and pretty soon you will be watching the "game" by yourself.
I liked it.
Infidelity is not a turn-on for me. But, who hasn't fantasized about doing his buddy's wife? That's all this was. And, I thought it was well done. Kind of a Mexican stand-off seduction. Pretty hot little story.
The rest?
What about the rest of the guys? Shouldn't they all have a turn?
Damn that was fun..
.....hope Eddy has me over for the next game!
5***** tom anon
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