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Changing Direction Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by gratefulgourmand03/31/13

Changing Direction....YES

HOT HOT!! Looking forward to next chapter

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by EllaBellaDonati04/02/13

Sexy Beginnings

Very sexy imagery as always Miss DT!! Very strong start too, laying the groundwork for later and I can only imagine where this story will go from here, but looking forwards to finding out!!!

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by kinkypoet04/04/13

Erotic but...

A more fantasy oriented ending would heighten the excitement if zombies came through the mirror to devour Ella :)

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by sbrooks10312/26/13

Good Start!

Maybe someone IS watching through the mirror!

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