All Comments on 'My Brother, My Master'

Quiet not quite.

this is up to your normal high standards....thanksfor the cum and keep writing....more

Hot and nasty with big reasons to cum and read! A Masterful plot filled with incest that spans generations.

Incest isn't my bag at all, but if you write it, I will read it. I was not disappointed. I love the internal struggle in a character as they fight a losing battle to not submit to something taboo. That makes it so much more delicious when they succumb. A masterful job of balancing character development with hot, sweaty action, as always.

Very ,very good it why you are one of the best and on my list to read !thanks again !!

You are absolutely one of the best writers on the site. Great writing and as usual the imagery is so hot. You paint a vivid image of this wonderful cum slut always willing to please her brother. Great "submission"!!!!

This story could take place anywhere and it is first class, 5 star pornographic fiction,

If it doesn't stir your prurient interest you and your dick must both be dead.

Completely filthy, depraved and hot! Nobody writes 'em like you do, SSL. You are a miracle of nature, writing talent, storytelling skills, and a lecherous, perverted mind.

Wonderful, and thanks!

It was ok, I guess. It just didn't do it for me, it felt more like BDSM than incest.

See above comment.

As has been said, was more BDSM than incest, being brother and sister just made the set up easier. And if she was coming up to 18 and didn't want to go why force her into something she obviously does not want to do. The brothers sudden swing into domination in a paragraph was a bit much to take as well.

Unlike the last couple commentators...I think it is the incest that transcends this past the generic...

The taboo is fun...plus the anal and twist ending I thought was delicious...

Ignore the naysayers...like most of your work this is a fun read...

You were the first writer I read on here and the first in my favourites list. I look forward to every story you release and this was not a disappointment. Absolutely hot and sexy and I look forward to the sequel :)

This was good for me up until the end. I was hoping for a progression of stories developing over time, but sadly no. The fact that the couple keep the relationship going beyond their teen years was good, but the introduction of the niece just didn't feel right.

I really didn't believe the depth of control the brother would have had to use to sway the sister that far. Not that may not have been the end result in the narrative but you missed conveying that to the reader. There were no previous tests of commitment that demonstrated this level of control. Crossing my own Taboo's is one thing but subjecting some one else to them is a completely other thing all together.

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Another great story !

Thanks for keeping me and my husband hot and wanting during your 100 stories

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The only thing that could make it better could be to know that Kimberly in fact is Kevin and his sister's daughter... and the fact that on Earth day the brothers try each year to make her pregnant.

Great story, just hoping we don't have to wait until the next Earth day to read the next chapter.

It was good all up to the ending.

Great story until the end what does kimberly body look like and please work on another chpt.

This is great and so hot!!

I want to be my brother's cum slut slave, maybe I'll show him your story and hope he takes the hint!

Please write more delicious chapters...

please write a sequel to this story!

I rly want to read about Kimberly

If he is going to do Mother & Daughter. why not his own Daughter and have a Tri-fecta.

Fuck!!!!!!! This is some hot fucking story, silk stockings lover!!!!! You must get horny as hell writing this stuff - or even thinking about it. Your sweet pussy must be wet and ready to fuck all the time - I just wish you could teach me some of the fuck practices you use all the time!

Treatment like the whore she was deserves the full treatment. this story needed a sack over the cunts ugly head...

Got tired after first page. Quit reading somewhere on page two. Power games and humiliation are boreing. Of course, during every sex act someone is going to be calling the shots. But why be an asshole about it. You make me weary.

Please write another part for this. It is one of my favorite stories of yours.

With JUBURIN another chapter introducing Kimberly to Earth Day and Submission. Maybe letting her know that Kevin is her Father/Uncle.

Loved it. So hot!

The intro, then the flashback of how their tradition came to be, and at the end in the present and the tease of bringing in Kimberly, her daughter.

Would love to see a sequel!

this is a totally different story than your others. left me slightly confused. for one no nylons involved lol.

also story was nothing about "love" or imaginations or dreams as it usually is (with incest/taboo) or at least also in your stories.

just pure physical lust, obedience and submission. which I don't have a problem with usually.

but then getting her daughter Kimberly involved would imply love for one another (Kevin & Kerry) to do (let do) such a thing and not obedience/submission.

Also as you wrote, they have kids and Partners of their own

"only" the one day or week they're together for earth day, they fuck and "love" one another and then allowing him to fuck her daughter is kinda far fetched.

Really only had a conflict with getting Kimberly involved, which added nothing really to the story. If you just ended like, "yea and they kept fucking each other, every year for earth day" -end

story would've been fine and hot and 5 Stars.

When will you write the one with the niece?

Really good, expecting the story from Mrs. Sheets to be master subs, the vegas trip and the sub of Kim. it will be great.

Congrats.

Been a long time fan and this story has been bookmarked for almost as long. Would love to read the sequel with the daughter involve.

thank you for the stories,

386. Iagree that although the sex was good, it missed some of your trademarks such as stockings. As often is the case you left us with teasers that seemed to indicate a sequel would arrive in about a year, but no, you seem to have forgotten. Shame!

I loved loved loved this story!! One of the very best brother/sister incest story I have read!! I will be checking out your other story's! Great job!!!

Kinda wish there was a part 2