All Comments on 'Feeding the Emptiness Ch. 02'

by talkingguineapig

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BahamaBahamaabout 11 years ago
Damn

That was hot !

LiveCatLiveCatabout 11 years ago
looking forward...

....eagerly to part 3. Very hot & wonderfully written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Looking forward for part 3..............

Its nice.....

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4ualmost 10 years ago
Deliciously dark & wonderful

I am in love with this story just as Ava is in love with this vampiress. I'm not sure if the scars on Ava's body is for her visions of wanting a woman or a vampire, nevertheless, it is akin to the injustices that LGBT suffer today. Lust & love is so artfully displayed here by the author. I felt every delicious dark moment of love's light. Thank you talkingguineapig - Lol, funny name

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Part three is needed

oh my goodness, don't leave me hanging!

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