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The Pirate and The Thief Ch. 11

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by cantfightfate04/01/13

Famous last words, I think.

Looking forward to more.

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by Anonymous04/02/13

What does that mean?

"One of his string arms curled around the base of her spine . . . "

"One of his string arms ... "?

He's a puppet?

A toy?

I haven't finished reading this yet, so . . .

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by Anonymous04/02/13

"Besides . . .

you've no idea what I'm doing . . . "

She said to him.

"You couldn't possibly have. It's your mind that made that conclusion."

She felt tenderness (and a little pity) for him.

She was always, at least, one step ahead of him.

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