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by twelveoone03/28/13

5ed

not a fan of box of text type,
this well worth reading
"like the emergence of spring for a grizzly whose mornings come like no coffee and a bank balance of negative worth. I"
Fucking A!!!
Question:
But covered softly in green like fireworks and newborn eagles. Protected by shadows, whores, and lepers.
may be a little much, maybe...you're the writer

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by SweetOblivion03/29/13

A pleasure to read

and lots of food for thought. Not sure about some of the imagery and vernacular but on the whole I really liked it - a good read. Sweet O.

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