All Comments on 'The Ritual Circle'

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stephenchapmanstephenchapmanabout 11 years ago

Nice mix of "left to the imagination" and specific details. Really liked the clockwork inspection and the animal mask. The mixed feelings of the main character felt very real.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

not enough animal dick

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Interesting and hot.....

Very intense and well written story. You have a gift for intricate story telling, please keep using it. Hope you enjoyed writing it........

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Unmistakably professional writing

"So let's skip the details and enter deeply, intimately into memory." That says nothing and everything.

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