All Comments on 'Kelly Ch. 02'

Get yourself an editor; I have problems with that too. But the story was fantastic! My stories are usually whole. I never have done a sequel, but You should. And soon too please.LOL

Great story. I like the emotion behind it, as well as the sex. We need to see James suck Kelly and Kelly penetrate James in the next chapter. Equal relationships are the best.

Fantastic, Fabulous, and wonderfully romantic!!!!

Did you perhaps mean 'consummate'?

"Consecrate - To declare or set apart as sacred: as in 'consecrate a church'."

you have romeo and juliet going baby really sexy. the romance and passion of both was scintillating. I think kelly should get girlier and girlier

Liked the new/next story. Would like to see more.

...Of a sequel. I really would love more description please, although those big brown eyes definitely got me going. Its been over a year, and we really are in need of more beautifully erotic stories like this one on Lit. Thank You for sharing those big brown eyes on here and please give us a sequel soon. Ignore the grammar hounds, but if an editor will help you get writing again, gimme a yell, be glad to help out!

I didn't like the first one, because of the misgendering, etc., but I really enjoyed this one.

that was alot of fun thank you.