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So, you despise the way he treats his wife, then...
You treat her 10 times worse? Yes sir, that's really showing the bastard, isn't it.
First Come See The Game!!***
And now this. What's wrong??
What the hell is wrong with you?
Wrong catagory, wrong plot and just plain fucking wrong. I would say the author is a total retard; but that would be a compliment.
Do us a favor and zip tie a plastic bag over your mouth.
look peteswick
favored you that makes you a sicko.
Very good! Clever little flash story.
Gave me a chuckle. Favorited. 4*
Fun story
And everyone else lighten the fuck up. It is a story, not a lesson in morality. She was willing and interested.
You meant to say
compliant, not complacent!
Look it up.....you have to get language right, especially when you are attempting to present us with a logical conundrum.
"My wife does what she's told"
Fred's wife, surely?
Good story
Five stars. Fuck the critics.
Enjoyed the read. Thanks for writing it.
Funny
Funny and erotic and a little food for thought. 5 stars.
Funny until you realize that he's basically turned her into a randomly violent cheating whore. Dude may be an ass, but there are lines.
To ILienBagby and others indire need of an education with the English language.
Whether you like the story or not, the author had it right with his spelling. how about you read your dictionary instead.
com•plai•sant
adjective
inclined or disposed TO please; obliging; agreeable or gracious; compliant:
the most complaisant child I've ever met.
Can be confused with: complacent.
complaisant comes from compliant.
com•pla•cent
adjective
pleased, especially with oneself or one's merits, advantages, situation, etc., often without awareness of some potential danger or defect; self-satisfied: The voters are too complacent to change the government.
For myself...I enjoyed the little tale of karma coming back to bite Fred on his complacent arse. Five stars from me
And to the annon who thought Joe was worse than Fred...not so, Joe gave Mary every chance to renege, and she choose to do his bidding. All's good
Thanks for the read
Amanda
Bad story
1*-TRASH
Bad Story
One Star. Fuck the critics.
Sick Stuff
All characters are fucked up.
Com.....ant
Ok 1/2 star, piss on the critics.
The story is a hoot!
Mandy_01, loved your comment. This is a nice twist on the controlling ass of a husband story. Joe included her in the decisions, even at the start as he watched for her reactions. Hubby set it all up, so if she wants to get something back for herself then have at. No bitch to burn here. Just a bastard who needs an adjustment. Karma-the queen bitch.......
Huh?
Intriguing twist of logic and a good poke at a puissant prick.
However that title........ Look, it's either "Complacent" or it's "Compliant".... I don't don't care which you choose, frankly, they could either one open doors and offer directions for two or three more in a series along this line. But "Complaisant"????? Really, what is that?
It would be nice to have a woman like that
With a woman like Mary at your pleasure, old Fred wouldn't be getting very much pussy anymore.
I liked the story.
Thanks for the read.
I liked it alot
When I got married I had PLANNED on being as obedient as Mary. Unlike Mary, my husband found my limits and tried to push me past them too much for me to stay compliant as Mary. I didn’t mind the groping in front of his friends while without panties or making pornos with him but I couldn’t get myself to do the streaking in public he kept on me to do. I’m sorry but I was just to scared of getting in legal trouble for doing that. I like that he is bossy and aggressive. I even like that he pushes my limits with his friends. I just don’t like to be humiliated in a bad way, get a bad reputation or get into legal trouble. Anyways, I really liked your story. I wish I was her.
dear annomny YOU'RE A FUCKING VILE PISSANT
and you don't even write stories. Gave it a 5
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