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by oldnornry04/02/13

Cuddling?

A ch. 2 might be interesting to explain in detail what and who is doing the "cuddling."

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by mojorisin196704/02/13

Very nice and tender story.

5*

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by JRMAN8404/02/13

I like Henry

I like Henry. I would have enjoyed more dialogue between him and him and Eileen especially in the lead in to sex. Maybe the two senior women were a little too matter of fact or easy. Eileen deserved some oral?

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by Scotsman6904/18/13

Off the wall

and quite lovely.

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by Kathouse05/07/13

Nice

This is a nice simple story about a woman needing more out of her life but not wanting sex in it. It ended up working out quite well, but in real life I don't know that it would be so easy, but a book isn't real life.

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by Alaska8405/18/13

Very nice

Enjoyed reading your story!

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