A New Encounter Ch. 04

if you were going to continue the story why the epilogue at the end of ch 1. if you didnt plan it why no do a re-edit to remove the epilogue?

Thank You

Thank You for continuing this story line!

Great story.

I read this series today. The first chapter epilogue worked for me. The follow up stories just fill in the blanks. Very nicely. Will there be more? Thanks

OMG

I swear this is so AWESOME, please keep going.

Truly a enjoyable read.

I found this story by chance and just couldn't stop reading. Im looking forward to the next chapter if there is any. Also I think you could make them a little longer than just one or 2 pages. But Im not one to judge because I know a lot of writers make stories this short to keep the audience interested. Im glad that you did mention in the first chapter that 10 years later they were living happily ever after. At least I know that if you don't complete the story at least it has a happy ending.

Great

Great story!!!! I can't weght for more.

Fantastic and Addictive

This series, simply put, is extremely enjoyable. I could even see it on HBO as a series i.e. Blood and Game of Thrones. Keep sending more. Don't let it end like this. But I do have one suggestion: make it longer than one page.

I love it!

I agree with the others: the chapters ARE a bit short, but the story is great! I especially liked the "ball and chain" reference...keep up the good work!

i love it plz keep going its an awesome story set up for a whole trilogy!

I love it keep making more!!!

It is a shame there will be no more chapters.

He has not posted anything new in a long time. I was reading stories on this website when this story was first posted. He may have added 1 new chapter last year but I don't think he's going to finish the story. But it is good for what it is so thank you for it.

Wonderfull!!

I can't wait for more. I also like the fact you incorporated the fact that animals love unconditionaly no mater what we accidently do to them. As you can guess I'm an animal lover! I realy got into your story, don't stop!!!

A fun read

The story seems to be developing gradually and I'm enjoying myself, thanks!
Jason