I loved it can't wait for more.
Great story, but you seriously need an editor, you're not consistent with the use of 'you're' the majority of the time it's needed, you use 'your'. Also words missing in sentences, punctuation and grammar need some work.
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I loved it can't wait for more.
Great story, but you seriously need an editor, you're not consistent with the use of 'you're' the majority of the time it's needed, you use 'your'. Also words missing in sentences, punctuation and grammar need some work.
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