All Comments on 'Not My Wife'

nice twist with an appropriate build up. TU

Didn't see that one coming, nice story

i love the twist at the end.

the ending made me chuckle-wouyld have loved for there to have been more indepth info during the screwing

Nice twist at the end.

Great read.

ending.

It is really humor but you couldn't label it as such without giving the ending away.

Boyd Percy

ASHSON lmfao you are just to much fun. I'm even okay this there not being a spanking, which she clearly needed from you.

A fun twist - full score!

My best laugh of the day. Thanks for sharing this delightful story. Damn it was funny!!!

This! :D

Nice little flash story. Enjoyed it!

you gotta love it when a plan comes together!

Well done!

Didn't see it coming. I was ready for it to be his wife playing a game. Or that his wife was dead or something, but not that. Great ending.

I liked the twist at the ending.

Thanks for the read.

A tad over the top with the typical male "I'm God's gift to women" , but an excellent twist in the tail at the end. A nice story, and keep on writing.

Thanks for writing. tom anon

Needed a good laugh today, thanks

That's funny. I am now a fan. Keep writing.

Good one!

That was a great twist.

Terrible.

halarious

greatest twist ending ever!

Good one.

Awesome XDDD

Didn't see it coming. Four stars

that was funny

Wrong, I figured he wasn't married. Your ending was better.

absolutely AWESOME

Funny!!!

Classic and a great twist. More please you’ve got a gift you!

Hitchcock reborn?