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Not My Wife

byAshson©
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by Anonymous

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by bruce2204/03/13

Real Fun

nice twist with an appropriate build up. TU

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by Anonymous04/03/13

An epic ending

Didn't see that one coming, nice story

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by Anonymous04/03/13

brilliant

i love the twist at the end.

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by Anonymous04/03/13

Not my wife

the ending made me chuckle-wouyld have loved for there to have been more indepth info during the screwing

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by Erotonaut04/03/13

Nice twist at the end.

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by Monagamous_Now04/03/13

Loved that twist at the end...

Great read.

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by Anonymous04/03/13

An Admirable

ending.

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by Anonymous04/03/13

Very Good

It is really humor but you couldn't label it as such without giving the ending away.

Boyd Percy

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by Anonymous04/03/13

lovin' it

ASHSON lmfao you are just to much fun. I'm even okay this there not being a spanking, which she clearly needed from you.

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by hansbwl04/03/13

Enjoyable

A fun twist - full score!

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by chytown04/03/13

Funny!!!!!!!****

My best laugh of the day. Thanks for sharing this delightful story. Damn it was funny!!!

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by Anonymous04/03/13

Best Lit Stories Ever List

This! :D

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by brujay04/04/13

Fun Read

Nice little flash story. Enjoyed it!

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by cpete04/04/13

Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha

you gotta love it when a plan comes together!

Well done!

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by Ducky704/04/13

Fun Fun story,

Didn't see it coming. I was ready for it to be his wife playing a game. Or that his wife was dead or something, but not that. Great ending.

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by digdaddyrich04/04/13

Nicely done

I liked the twist at the ending.

Thanks for the read.

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by Anonymous04/04/13

A good read

A tad over the top with the typical male "I'm God's gift to women" , but an excellent twist in the tail at the end. A nice story, and keep on writing.

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by Anonymous04/10/13

I liked it, especially the ending: 5*****

Thanks for writing. tom anon

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by auhunter0407/14/13

Needed a good laugh today, thanks

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by textosterone11/27/13

Great Story... I needed that. 5 Stars

That's funny. I am now a fan. Keep writing.

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by gordo1201/04/14

ROFLMAO

Good one!

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