A Bet's A Bet

I like

great story, loved it, very hot

WOW

What an amazing story hon, thank you.

Turn Gay?

Give me a fucking break.

You can't "turn" someone straight, and you sure as hell can't "turn" anyone gay.

Now get the fuck out of here.

I'm not gay...

but I got sucked into it...

Ba da bing!

Sorry old joke I could not resist!

Interesting and I sorta liked it.....
Ky says he's always loved Nick but he didn't hypnotize Nick to be gay. He made Nick submissive and bottom only. There was a meanness to the process and the threat of blackmail low. I wish he freeded Nick's inner gay guy in a more positive way. Now I'm just worried Ky will be a controlling abusive prick of a boyfriend.

It's well written and leaves me wondering what happens next.......

I liked it but.. if Ky really did love him I don't think he would resort to deception to show how much he cares. I agree you can't turn someone gay, but if it was there and not just wishful on Ky's part honesty is always the best policy.

Nice Story

Though someone can't be "turned" into gay or straight. Nick was lying to himself that he was straight he was at-least bi.

I almost didn't read this

because stories with hypnosis, drunken stupor or sex partners drugged out of their wits usually turn me off. But this one actually did it for me. I got so hard!

Would have been better

If he could have been a top too, but still well written.

This story made me so hard

I would love to be topped by a dom like KY. The section where Nick sat on Ky and road his cock it's so hot, I wish it was me. Great job, please continue writing.

awesome story

Wish something like that would happen to me. would love a top to show me the pleasures of serving a man.

Awesome

Awesome story. Loved every minute of it.

Fucking Awesome!

wasnt going to read this but it pulled me in and im glad i did. although something like this would never happen in real life i would love for someone to try to prove it works on me, i would let them know that it did'nt bbut after i would let them break in my virgin ass for putting effort into trying

that was so hot!!!! i am so hard cdkim

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That was so gay

Beautiful ending

The dual concept of using hypnosis to convince Nick to do gay which he doesn't have desire to do Plus "turning him gay," are absurd!

Ignoring those facts, i loved it. Well written and easy paced.

sorrynothing preal

sorry ,the beginning
was interesting ,but the end of thestory was rather predictabley

A Great Accomplishment

The accomplishment was enticing so many new readers to your "WEB" with a few well-chosen words. The fact that the wide spectrum of responses tells me you should be proud all kinds of readers were ready for "your style" of writing - and you can't expect to please them all But They Read this fine script. I personally felt the magic and spirit in Kyle's actions - nothing was forced on either one. The challenge to be hypnotized was a first sign of free will ...perhaps seeking guidance. Now the challenge is yours! Is your style to post stories where characters are allowed to grow, or will the writer let the reader's imagination finish each story as our own experiences take us. BOTTOM LINE: You have a growing fan club encouraging more insight into your creative mind. We hope you continue ... Only in directions that appease Your Spirit.

hi

That story was absolutely amazing

I loved it

I don’t know why anyone would have a negative comment, your story was great.
I would love for this to happen to me.
I love woman I don’t think I could fall in love with a man, but I love having my ass fucked by dildo’s.
I would love to have a man fuck me.
My wife, won’t let me do that. Not that i have asked. But we kind of side stepped that conversation.

Keep writing!

Great

I thought it was a great story and hope you keep writing.

Oh, what a tangled...

web this story is. The sex is only good because of the story... the seduction of his will, and with his willing participation. But the story, and the seduction are truly enchanting. He wants it. He chooses it. I'd love the sex to be a bit more graphic, but you've absolutely nailed the seduction and the passion of the surrendered realization. Mmmm, it felt like love to me. Thanks.

another selfish b*st*rd RAPES his "friend"???

Well I guess some people are pretty low. That *ssh*le kyle takes the cake as probably the lowest *sshole of them all!!!!!!! Lying to his so called friend(I say that because,1: he tricked and lied to him 2: he used him 3: he then RAPED both his mind AND his body). Frankly after a little dose of a reality check -- Nick needs to punch his EX-friend right in the nose tell the cheep b*st*rd to keep the $100 bucks if he is that shallow. Nick then should never speak to or see him ever again.
There is NOTHING redeeming in this story, it is a cheap ploy to make foolish and gullible people think you actually WANT to be raped and used. These charlatans that use hypnosis to ruin other peoples lives should not just be jailed but (thoughts that can't be written here)very definitely be given a LARGE dose of their OWN medicine.See how THEY like being used.
Oh! and for you "romantic" types that want to think of this as a "love"??? story -- I quote " Kyle said if I didn't keep going with the hypnosis until the end of the bet he'd send my pictures to everyone I knew. I was stupid enough to include my face in one of them, so I knew I was pretty fucked. " try and say THAT was not a criminal threat AND blackmail!!! (also he rapes him repeatedly at every session)
Sadly I see that there are 75? foolish and easily duped people who favorited this this glorification of rape and betrayal.
Yes, I know the perverted and sick types are going to love this crap anyway but as a survivior of rape myself -- I would kill the s.o.b. for being such an arrogant, cold,heartless,selfish,unfeeling and evil b*st*rd to do that kind of thing to someone and THEN have the unmitigated gall to say he loved him??????????
What a line of total BULLSH*T!!!!!
I hope Nick get's the professional help he will need to deal with the betrayal of his 'so-called' "friend" who only USED him to rape him.
oh! shut up--you know as well as I do that if he TRULY LOVED HIM he NEVER WOULD HAVE RAPED NICK just to get $ and to totally humiliate him!!!!!!!! "It took me a moment to think. He'd ...(garbage omitted), taken my free will, turned me into his own personal fucktoy..."
Now I remember why I hardly ever come here--- it is full of sick twisted crap! There is enuff of THAT in the world already,they should just shut this site down ;this is only one of hundreds of stories here glorifying illegal and sick behavior. I'm tired of finding dozens of sick crap just to see the one or two good ones that may exist. It's too bad there are a lot of 'Nicks' in this world being mindf*cked and body raped by filth just like that #$%^&*(*&^%$# selfish arrogant kyle b*st*rd! and to the 75 - how many of YOU wish secretly to be raped,a possible reason for liking this 'story'.

awesome

usually don't like hypno stories but this one was great. I love straight men embracing their gay side. well done. 5 stars.

Love your mind

I am familiar with hypnosis, and it will make a "true" subject do just about any thing you want him or her to do. The planting of suggestions also works. To what extreme will the subject go , I can not tell you , because I never pushed any agenda further than i cared to go . However, I have had tremendous repeated sex sessions in one night with the same subject, and each time the subject's reactions became greater as I would plant the suggestions, have great sex , then returned them to the sleep or rest mode, only to repeat the suggestions again. Believe me, it can be great fun, even with several subjects at once. There are two types of people, the one that is able and has the ability to put another under, and the other one,-- the subject, -- to be able and willing to be Hypnotized.

I think this is great!

I think you did a great job with this, I've always found hypnosis interesting, I've never known anyone to try it so I honestly can't say if I believe it or not. But anyway this was amazing and really well written. And don't listen to the crazed reviewer that said this being basically disgusting and rape. First off it's a story not real they need to get over their self. And technically it wasn't rape because he wanted it anyway. In a book or story many things can happen that in society it's wrong but it's just a story thus making it not wrong. At least in my opinion. Sorry I kind of got side tracked because I was angry, but i like this story I hope you post more ! :)

loved your story

normally don't like hypnosis, but your story was very good.

WOW THAT WAS A GREAT BOOK

I love gay stories I know I'm a female but I like reading gay male stories

Liked the story. Kind of reminded me of how I became gay. I was picked up by a guy who gave me a bj. It was the best I ever had. He then began playing with his cock and I couldn't help but touching his cock. After stroking him for awhile, I couldn't help but to begin sucking his cock. It was wonderful especially when he came in my mouth. We talked for awhile about what had happened and how I felt about it. I had to admit that I loved it and would like to suck more cocks. He then told me he wanted to fuck me and I said ok because I wanted to experience that.. He was very good knowing that I was a virgin he took his time. Once he knew that I was enjoying being fucked, he fucked me hard and I found myself asking him to. After that night, I knew I was gay.

It was ok

Nice story but why go thru all that bs because, you like someone. He wanted his friend just as bad as he had his friend think.
Go Figure>