Now that was a good story have to add you to my favorites
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Anonymous04/01/13
Ignore him//her
Ignore that supercritical "Anonymous"! That is rather a beautiful story, although maybe a little short in the build-up to sex and the act itself. Very enjoyable though - give us more!
An excellent incest story. I hope you will continue with additional chapters. Maybe catching Mom and Dad and their friends with a little swapping. ALso, how about a visit to her university and her friends?
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Anonymous04/01/13
Hot as fuck
Well done, loved the level of detail and dialogue.
I loved the part when the sister got down on her knees and started giving her brother a blowjob. I also liked when the brother aimed his cock right into the sisters mouth and she ate it
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Anonymous04/02/13
I want more! :)
The tone of the story is what really got me interested and hard as hell:) more of this great type writing please:)
I had the thought that mom and dad were swinging with their new found friends and wanted to read about them fucking in the woods and the kids watching them.
I also wanted the brother and sister to fuck again and they find that they really like their new relaionship and want to continue with making love to each other when the vacation is over.
A creatively risque tale that flowed rather well. The erotic story line has the reader enticed and craving more! It had parts of this reader giving a standing ovation. May I suggest the continuing of the charter descriptions throughout to keep the characters in the readers mind. Perhaps other words of description so the rerun factor is not an issue. More sexual action and dialogue could not hurt!
This story made my heart beat so fast that it actually ached. Oh my god for a brief moment I wished that I had a brother instead of five sisters. Favorited, five stars, please write more.
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Anonymous05/01/13
this is a great story, but really...
where does a brother's big stiff prick belong but up his sister's cute little twat?
Loved your story.
As another said, it starts with the increased heartrate, as it is a believable scenario.
This COULD happen to me.
Well done and please, keep it going. I think that this brother and sister could have many, many adventures on this holiday, least of all that he repays a few favours pleasuring her as well, and later, gets to know her flatmates.
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Anonymous06/01/13
More
I could imagine a second chapter at her apartment with her roommates.
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Anonymous09/06/13
Swimming in SF
Very few non-drunk people actually go swimming off the SF beaches because the water is freezing.
Please write a other part with him fucking his sister and her roommates
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Anonymous10/30/15
Great Story
Would love to read more - maybe something about Lana and her girlfriends.
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Anonymous04/03/16
Must Continue
This is a very sexy start. Bro & sis should stop running, hide behind a rock and watch parents and their new friends, both women being MILFs, as they strip down, skinny dip and swap partners. Then continue with mom, dad and their friends catching bro and sis skinny dipping, and joining them; but no sex yet. Then new couple invites bro and sis to join them in their room, unbeknownst to mom and dad. Then mom and dad asking bro and sis to join them for private party. Then finally, all six going skinny dipping and swapping.
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Anonymous06/21/16
Great story
My first real girlfriend was the leader of our group. She got us to play spin the bottle and more. Eventually, not only did she kiss and suck off her brother in front of us at a naughty party but she got my sister to suck me off to completion as all the others watched and cheered. Much later after that I got tired of my girlfriend telling I sucked at eating her out enough to ask my sister for help. Not right then but eventually we learned oral on each other. We never went much beyond that. We are both grandparents now. I can't believe we did that
Fucking hot
She is a hot sexy cunt. I would have fucked her into next month. More and more with lots more cunt and cock action,
Great
Sexy and clean without making it creepy. Please keep writing.
Story
Now that was a good story have to add you to my favorites
Ignore him//her
Ignore that supercritical "Anonymous"! That is rather a beautiful story, although maybe a little short in the build-up to sex and the act itself. Very enjoyable though - give us more!
TREAD is correct.Trod is past tense.
Thank you for this cute and developing story (I hope)..
The Eagle gives two talons up and 4*.
I enjoyed that story
I am not the grammar Nazi and I enjoyed the story so consider a chapter two
Nice
If this where to continue in a second part i'd definetly read it
Great story
An excellent incest story. I hope you will continue with additional chapters. Maybe catching Mom and Dad and their friends with a little swapping. ALso, how about a visit to her university and her friends?
Hot as fuck
Well done, loved the level of detail and dialogue.
nice
please continue ASAP
Hot story of a brother and sis
I loved the part when the sister got down on her knees and started giving her brother a blowjob. I also liked when the brother aimed his cock right into the sisters mouth and she ate it
I want more! :)
The tone of the story is what really got me interested and hard as hell:) more of this great type writing please:)
So fucking hot
Wonderful, more and more of this please and soon
verry good
verry good to see someone enjoys things with sis
Really nice
Very sweet and loving, but I had wanted more.
I had the thought that mom and dad were swinging with their new found friends and wanted to read about them fucking in the woods and the kids watching them.
I also wanted the brother and sister to fuck again and they find that they really like their new relaionship and want to continue with making love to each other when the vacation is over.
Thans for the read.
Bravo!
A creatively risque tale that flowed rather well. The erotic story line has the reader enticed and craving more! It had parts of this reader giving a standing ovation. May I suggest the continuing of the charter descriptions throughout to keep the characters in the readers mind. Perhaps other words of description so the rerun factor is not an issue. More sexual action and dialogue could not hurt!
Loads of lustful admiration to the author,
god damn, this story is fucking awesome.
MORE! !!!!!!!!!!
You are off to a great start with this one... Please MORE chapters with this one... maybe include the roommates and their siblings
Pain
This story made my heart beat so fast that it actually ached. Oh my god for a brief moment I wished that I had a brother instead of five sisters. Favorited, five stars, please write more.
this is a great story, but really...
where does a brother's big stiff prick belong but up his sister's cute little twat?
Sublimie moment of awareness
Loved your story.
As another said, it starts with the increased heartrate, as it is a believable scenario.
This COULD happen to me.
Well done and please, keep it going. I think that this brother and sister could have many, many adventures on this holiday, least of all that he repays a few favours pleasuring her as well, and later, gets to know her flatmates.
More
I could imagine a second chapter at her apartment with her roommates.
Swimming in SF
Very few non-drunk people actually go swimming off the SF beaches because the water is freezing.
Great story
Hope you have another chapter
sequel
A sequel would be awesome to this story!
Please write a other part with him fucking his sister and her roommates
Great Story
Would love to read more - maybe something about Lana and her girlfriends.
Must Continue
This is a very sexy start. Bro & sis should stop running, hide behind a rock and watch parents and their new friends, both women being MILFs, as they strip down, skinny dip and swap partners. Then continue with mom, dad and their friends catching bro and sis skinny dipping, and joining them; but no sex yet. Then new couple invites bro and sis to join them in their room, unbeknownst to mom and dad. Then mom and dad asking bro and sis to join them for private party. Then finally, all six going skinny dipping and swapping.
Great story
My first real girlfriend was the leader of our group. She got us to play spin the bottle and more. Eventually, not only did she kiss and suck off her brother in front of us at a naughty party but she got my sister to suck me off to completion as all the others watched and cheered. Much later after that I got tired of my girlfriend telling I sucked at eating her out enough to ask my sister for help. Not right then but eventually we learned oral on each other. We never went much beyond that. We are both grandparents now. I can't believe we did that
WOW AGAIN
Another fantastic story and thank you!!!!
Poor Her
Poor thing! Too bad she didn't get to cum
Oh boy...
Another hot story. I thought that this one was actually kind of cute... hot, but cute!
loved it.
Wish you added a chapter with more sex and eating her sweet pussy
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