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Violent_Delightsabout 11 years agoVery Good!
Well written and excitingly tantalizing! I cannot wait for the next chapter.
Maynessabout 11 years agoGood start
Got a lot of potential, looking forward to the next chapter. Well done. Thank you.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoSolid start but please
get an editor. Couple of grammar issues. Need more flow and explaining of other character like Thanos and why would a woman give up her child?
KittenCuddleralmost 11 years agoPromising Start!
Please continue this story as I would love to know what happens next!
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