All Comments on 'It's not what you think'

by Desejo

Sort by:
  • 4 Comments
SweetOblivionSweetOblivionabout 11 years ago
A perfect expose of the limitations of male linen

though female cross dressers and executives may disagree with your sentiments. S.O.

AngelineAngelineabout 11 years ago
You filled those empty

clothes with enough structure to make the poem a lot more than a look into the closet. I especially like the 3rd and 4th strophes as they offer a clue to what the poem is really about to me: loss, emptiness and how to make life fit again. Really well written--the theme is accessible without hitting the reader over the head. Your writing reminds me a lot of another poet who used to write here, also very gifted with words. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
*****

It may not be what I think, but I like it.

Five.

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
and a pop song was born

Baby you can share my closet

too bad Queen is gone

on a serious note, nice end.

yeh. I fived

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous