All Comments on 'A Day in the Park'

Can't wait to hear what happens when the boys cum over. LOL

I love to give women the opportunity to watch me stroke myself. Your story was a great one to read while stroking :)

Your story was perfect. It ended perfectly. Really....sometimes when stories end leaving something to be imagined they are better. I have just called my mistress and read her your story. It turned her on so much .......I will be seeing her in a half hour and know you have made two people very happy

i LOVE THIS STORY i CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!

This is a very hot story!

That can mean almost anything, meaning as little as 10 % is true, with that said for purpose of my comment let's say most of it's true which I'm sure it's not.

If this was my wife I would be one pissed off SOB if I found out while I'm out supporting our family and the kids are in school she is off acting like a slut. I would question if she had want it takes to raise the kids properly. Now take the same woman who is single and childless, who cares what she does. The wife says she can not cheat on her husband. What she is doing is hurting and disrespecting there marriage. It may not be physical cheating, but if I was her husband I would dump her if I caught her exposing herself . Just my opinion.

Good story, but she slipped into cheating too easily. You need to give us some background of why she will do this.

It was ok. A bit obvious, clearly not a true story so why say it was,

Another cheating slut in the making. How exciting...

She HAS been cheating on him, with Debbie. Also, the Earth Day connection here is fairly weak.

Still a great story, though, I will certainly give you that.

... what Staci, Debbi and friends get up to next :-)

love your first story, hope you have more to tell!

I quite enjoyed your story, good writing and I look forward to more!

I used to jack off for the girls in my high school gang. There is nothing quite so satisfying as cumming when people of the opposit sex watch, It is like baring your soul to them.

Loved your story please write more. Wish you were grinding your pussy against my face, I think a woman who does that is precious.

omg loved that story. Stroking now wishing I was there to watch.

Very hot . I like the set up

Enjoyed your story and wish you would write more. Also have a big bulge in my shorts.

I wonder why anyone should marry if fidelity is so cheap.

The author is very good at exciting men. She should write more, perhaps to better purpose. She's ready to go to a higher level.

I had a girl friend that love to expose her self got off on it. She would wear a dress or skirt when we go out never any panties and half bra's that didn't cover her perky nipples. Of course all this exposures were alcohol induced. When she was drinking she turned into a exhibitionist. One night after the bars let out it was 2 am nice night she said lets go to the park. Once at the park she surprised me took her wrap around dress off was in just a bra garter belt stockings and heels. She jumped out of the car. I grabbed her dress chasing her she was laughing.She stopped at a park bench held on to the back of it spread her legs said take me right here laughing I tried to put the dress back on her but she wouldn't let just kept saying fuck me. I looked around no one was around dropped my pants and underwear entered her from behind. Gave her a orgasm then shot a load in her. She put the dress on but left it open and we walked but to the car got in.

And hot

That was great! So intense. I loved the story and the scene with you masturbating on the bench was incredibly arousing. Please write the next part.

Del moy selabri constabli brafisto!

El uchi conaftico moy abri constablo.

Cona abri del constable much festa amecro.

Brafisto.

Glad I ran across this. So hot imagining watching some get off at the park. Looking forward to part two?

You are incredibly sexy and well written.

Very arousing you made me very happy

good i imaged you aroused, and I had a happy moment

Loved it. This is proof that you don’t need a complex plot for at beautiful story arc

A very well-written, interesting story ... I loved it! Two scenes of absolute exhibitionism and voyeurism ... Both deliciously told ... I like to play at the park too ... I go to a few, but one in particular has a one mile walking trail ... I love to walk it naked sometimes early in the morning ... The feeling is exhilarating ... I masturbate there too at times, and have even been watched ...It's such a rush!!! Anyway, I loved the story and how you wrote it ... Good pace and length ... I'm looking forward to the next one!

You write very well and this is a very arousing story....love to see part two1

OMG!! This was so erotic, so hot and arousing!! Please, please, PLEASE tell me there is going to be a part 2 where Deddie and Staci break their wedding vows and both get ravaged by these 2 young studs!! I wouldn't given this 20 stars if I could have, but 5 is all the higher I could go here. Tremendous story, StaciRay!!!!!