by cuninglinguist61
hope next chapter comes sooner . might be interesting if he went back to the pastor and suggest mentally that the pastor wanted him to take his wife.
Makes me want to become an electrician. Looking forward to chapter 3 and seeing what becomes of the doctor and the preacher's wife! Thanks for the read.
It would be great if he had the pastor's wife become a dominant and force the pastor to watch him fuck her brains out
Great, five stars, the Jenny scene was truly hot. I like that these are adults and not kids. Now for what anonymous said, make the pastor's wife a dominant so the pastor watches while he fucks her. Keep them coming, you have found a rhythm. Can't wait for the scene with the Indian doctor, hope she read the Kama Sutra...hint hint.
It's not nice making us wait months for the next installment. Not nice at all.
Great take on the mind control theme. I can't wait to see what develops with him and the doctor, and him and the pastor's wife. Keep up the great work.
and enjoy your writing skill very much. Please don't keep us hanging for the next chapters.
This is very well done the writing is skillful done and the plot is perfect. I hope he Uses his powers for more than sex and rearranges the pastors sick mind as to never mistreat a woman again. He should send to her a message to call him if it happens again. I hope this never ends
it is time for an intervention and rescue of the pastor's wife.
she deserves it, he would appreciate her. and the familial rivalry between aunt and niece would not be healthy.
and then, of course, there is the lovely neurosurgeon, still waiting for the follow-up appointment.
But he refuses to grant his women orgasms until he's ready?
Why not gray them a hundred orgasms? I think that would make them more thankful.
Or, why not grant them an orgasm every 5 minutes. I'm pretty sure they would be thankful and willing to show their appreciation.
Just a thought.
This intriguing second chapter really grabs hold of the reader's attention. A very strange pastor (who behaves in a very strange unChristian manner) only hints of greater drama to come. Superb plot overall, and the love scene in the latter part of the chapter is no mere "filler"; it is integral to the plot and indeed part of it, and it concludes with yet another mystery that remains unanswered at the end of the chapter.
Well done! The psychology is well conceived and the scenarios delightful. Much better than most erotic writing on Amazon.