All Comments on 'Leaving her bored'

dresssed up not to look like one... funny and a little sad.

writing and like demure, I like that you've obscured the form with a pretty dazzling run of words. I'm not sure I like the use of "festering" especially with "crust" as I don't think a crust can fester, can it? Also there's a bit of an ew factor there which doesn't really add anything to the poem otherwise. Overall though the poem made me smile: it's the kind of situation that could only happen in our modern digital world and you stated it politely (mostly), but clearly and cleverly.