An Extra Pose

Poorly imagined and badly executed.

Your story wasn't original, it wasn't told in a manner to hold one's interest, and the plot (if that's what you call it) was flimsy to begin with. Do you write bad stories to get bad reviews? Why not cut out the middle man and just write your own horrible reviews, so we're not part of the equation?

Win, win.

Holes .. .

. . . there are too many holes in this one to consider it a complete story. It has potential, of course, but there are things readers should know to complete the picture. How did all of the admissions come about? How did modelling, even with a young and attractive male, turn into back seat sex? There must have been emotions, decisions, second guessing. The progression from draped with children to nude holding an erection just seemed to fly on by. Where are the details in the story?

Sorry state of mind

Any male that gets off on this kind of life style is in need of professional care.

But let me ask my standard question will she think it was good if he had multiple affairs? How about him having two or three kids with one or more women and spending time with them?

Well done. Enjoyed the read.

Interesting premise ...

... but poorly executed, and certainly in need of some serious editing. Your imagination didn't go far enough. You made leaps of credibility to your readers.

Ehhh!

The story would have been much better if told from the wife's side. As that was where the excitement was. Both characters showed about as much emotion as a debate on weather to have another beer. No emotion at all, if the characters have little interest in what's going on, why would the readers care either?

Chilley

Kind of Dull

No tension...she fucks a couple of guys and he displays essentially no emotion about it, he raises someones else's child and all he says is that he is a nice guy...hey, I agree that it isn't the kid's fault his mom is a cheater, but at least some emotion should be felt by him, perhaps some guilt by her.

Large number of problems!

This tale is rife with problems. Those do NOT include what she did, or how Hubby reacted. In the LW category, a variety of both partner decisions are covered under the LIT guidelines (it IS, after all, their playground, so THEIR rules!).

Several of the problems are addressed by excellent & thoughtful commentary. They include PoV and (lack of) emotion. Also, providing a reasonable track to follow the story (connecting the dots!). It should not be a maze or cross-word puzzle!

In this story, the beginning suggests a problem, but it does not flesh out until much later in the tale (if it is EVER a problem!) The ending just sits there like a turd in a punch bowl. There is no discernible issue or family decision presented by this story!

2*

Huh?

Isn't a narrator required to have a point of view? Whether I agree or disagree I couldn't determine what position the husband took. His concerns, like his wife's fidelity, were truncated with the ending of the story.

You only get one life

Get it be, she obviously wants to continue life with you and sexual flings such as you mentioned are best left where they belong - history - think of yourself as lucky to have a sexy wife who had a great figure to be chosen as a model. I enjoyed the story for what it was an episode in your life together. I am sure you both had your own moments over the years to look back on and smile about.

The husband is Floating

... some where in space... I too think the author has not presented a complete tale... However, got a basic foundation to bring forth a great submission

What a Maroon

Your husband character is an idiot. And his wife has no respect for him and why should she.