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by Anonymous04/04/13

Not to be a nitpicker, but...

Great story of a chance meeting turning into more -- quickly. But there were a few mistakes: when did she change from a khaki skirt and green blouse into a sundress? Need to learn the difference between They're (they are), there, and their. Misused a couple of times.

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