"He grabbed a fistful of the cotton at her shoulders" Cotton was common around places like Egypt, India, and Asia, but uncommon in Northern Europe, the British Aisles, and Scandinavia. Linen (from the flax plant) was what was used more often.
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Anonymous04/04/13
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I hope I don't have to wait too long for the next chapter. I am hooked
For your comment on cotton. I do realize this as i have done research into it since. Cotton shifts weren't that common, but being that she is from a privileged background, where her father has dibs in far too many things at once! while the story will later explain for you, i thought it could be excusable. I am no historian! lol, and i have no intentions of coming across that i am, but i have a love of story telling, and this story is by no means factual. The objects within it is simply to add richness to the development, and to make it semi believable. Thank you for reading, and thank you for your comments.
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Anonymous04/05/13
Great!
I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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Anonymous04/07/13
wow
this is great! I was sad to see that there was no second chapter, but then I saw it's a new story. Can't wait for the next chapter!
What happens next? How soon before another chapter is written? I enjoyed the story and hope the girl's family does not get spared after all. Allow the girl to watch her family be punished, as she has been punished all those years. Please write more. Thanks!
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Wow
Loved it. Can't wait for the next chapter
FYI - Linen not cotton
"He grabbed a fistful of the cotton at her shoulders" Cotton was common around places like Egypt, India, and Asia, but uncommon in Northern Europe, the British Aisles, and Scandinavia. Linen (from the flax plant) was what was used more often.
MORE
I hope I don't have to wait too long for the next chapter. I am hooked
Thankyou Anonymous
For your comment on cotton. I do realize this as i have done research into it since. Cotton shifts weren't that common, but being that she is from a privileged background, where her father has dibs in far too many things at once! while the story will later explain for you, i thought it could be excusable. I am no historian! lol, and i have no intentions of coming across that i am, but i have a love of story telling, and this story is by no means factual. The objects within it is simply to add richness to the development, and to make it semi believable. Thank you for reading, and thank you for your comments.
Great!
I can't wait to find out what happens next!
wow
this is great! I was sad to see that there was no second chapter, but then I saw it's a new story. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Loved it and I'm of to read the next chapter.
Thanks it was amazing.
tempting beginning
What happens next? How soon before another chapter is written? I enjoyed the story and hope the girl's family does not get spared after all. Allow the girl to watch her family be punished, as she has been punished all those years. Please write more. Thanks!
very cinderellla-esc I am intrigued as to where this is going
wonderful story so far
Thanks for sharing
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