All Comments on 'Receive Talent With Open Arms'

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SweetOblivionSweetOblivionalmost 11 years ago
Okay.

This is okay but it doesn't say anything new or differently - you might think about how you can lift this up from it's tendency to sink towards the banal and pedestrian (not that this is banal or pedestrian in itself) to find your own voice. S.O.

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