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Nicely descriptive
A whole new cast for 'Cheers'. S.O.
OK now I get it
this is all a longer piece (bar maids, bar regulars). And of course Tess you can't write a bad poem if you tried (well lol mebbe if you tried). So this is good and a window into each of the characters in the bar. But again I wonder who is the narrator and what is the point of the story, overall? In any case you're creating a mural here and I'll be interested to see it all together. xo
I hoped.....
...these would follow on from The Bar, interior and the bar tender, who narrates the whole series but that's impossible because they were submitted months ago.
Thanks to you both for reading this and giving me food for thought.
Tess
Cantabulous!
Barbie and the Bard
the baron drags a bit, and not just his dick
Interesting, whose voice are you taking?
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