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by SweetOblivion04/01/13

good stuff

but might improve with a review and some tightening - I thought your other endeavours today were both better, not to say this isn't pretty damned good. S.O.

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by HarryHill04/01/13

Susan is in a strange place today

and I like it. Somewhere between the stream of conscious and the heart felt words there is a simple beauty. and my card will always be the hermit.

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by Anonymous04/01/13

Harry

You're in between the mountains and wasteland. Have you got a light?

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by HarryHill04/02/13

For Anon

nope, nor a clue either.

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