All Comments on 'Old Man'

but might improve with a review and some tightening - I thought your other endeavours today were both better, not to say this isn't pretty damned good. S.O.

and I like it. Somewhere between the stream of conscious and the heart felt words there is a simple beauty. and my card will always be the hermit.

You're in between the mountains and wasteland. Have you got a light?

nope, nor a clue either.