All Comments on 'Your Breath'

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SweetOblivionSweetOblivionabout 11 years ago
nice prose poem

Pithy and to the point and all the more powerful for that - good stuff. S.O.

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
not a fan of block o'text

except for the last line. this one sinks a bit into the cliche

didn't vote

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Single female writer. Most of my work is an effort to unlock my true self from the trauma of a lifetime of violent experiences, both sexual and nonsexual. I enjoy using the prose poetry style but have been known to venture from and to form and category. I enjoy reading comment...

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