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by SweetOblivion04/01/13

I love this disjointed staccato prose poem

Hard, cynical and earthy - niiiice! S.O.

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by Angeline04/01/13

This is really good

It's disjointed and abrupt which works well with the subject. The narrator's shock and anger are all but palpable and the whole thing comes off sounding like she has just been punched in the gut. I'll look to read more from you.

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