All Comments on 'No Mercy Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Liked it...

As I did the first part...

Well written and entirely believable...

Part three would be appreciated...

addammsaddammsalmost 7 years ago
Excellent

Your control of language is equaled by the control shown by Naomi over her hapless sub.

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