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'Steamy' - My First Time Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/06/13

A nice easy read

Unlike the other reader, I found this to be a great easy read that kept me interested the whole time. I say keep writing, because it was enjoyable. The absence of over the top vulgarity was a nice touch, and not explaining every little detail let me fill in the surroundings myself.

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by Anonymous04/06/13

On the other hand...

I like it, so finish it, please.

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by Anonymous04/06/13

Enjoyed this

Good buildup and whilst a little predictable, well worth the time spent "getting there". Looking forward to the next episode!

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by Anonymous04/06/13

More Please .....

Well written and just the right amount of "steamy".

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by ReiDeBastos04/09/13

Very nice!

Erotic and very believable - something quite rare around here!

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