All Comments on 'Shelby's Troubles'

Thank you dirtygirl jenna! Thoroughly enjoyed the story! I look forward to reading more from you!

GREAT STORY!!! Can't wait to read your next o e :)

Maybe this could work for the Acupuncture guys.

Nicely written! Had me raging..........

The writings I submit are pure fantasy and have no basis in reality. I take artistic license to suspend the reality of any situation to make the story more enjoyable. In the very real world, there are infections, disease and horrible people and consequences to all actions. In this fantasy world of mine, all of this is suspended. I write for my enjoyment and choose to share on this site.

Realistic and enjoyable, and the suspension of disbelief was tolerable.

This story was incredibly hot, and I hope you make it into a series. I would recommend utilizing the editors here on this site, there were some grammar issues in this story that disrupted the flow somewhat. I've used the help of a few editors myself and it really helps.

Good luck

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More chiro!

Sounds like the kind of tension relief I need. I've had a few large cocks in my ass, but probably never anything as big as you describe. I'd love to find a chiropractor like that to see if I could take it. Makes my cock throb just thinking about it.