All Comments on 'Sex and The Wilderness'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
WTF????

wtf was this....... a dream gone bad??? really really couldn't get into iy at all!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
reading

Can't hardly read let alone understand due to all the "word -- word," and "...." used so much and frequently. Author needs to take basic level writing classes again, this time paying attention in class.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 11 years ago
An interesting storyline

A nice start to what could be a good series.

I think this chapter set-up the characers and the situation in which they live in, which seemed to be believable.

Nicely done and a first time poster. Hope to see a lot more of the author's work.

Thanks for the read.

Morlan502Morlan502almost 11 years ago
Oh Yes

I can envision one heck of a erotic series here, so I am waiting for the next installment to see where this story goes!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Made Our Day...

We loved your story. My sons and daughters are naked with me, their naked mother...all of us cumming...thanks. Can't wait for your next installment to this story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
*****

Loved it, you have to write more. Please.

4nicolas4nicolasalmost 11 years ago

I really hope you will continue this story. I read your other stories they are great just like this one. Thanks

dustdevildustdevilabout 10 years ago
It is a start

Need more story. Kind of leaves us hanging.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Based on .22WMR, ALL Your stories get 1 star

Horse shit!

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