by TellMeATale2013
wtf was this....... a dream gone bad??? really really couldn't get into iy at all!
Can't hardly read let alone understand due to all the "word -- word," and "...." used so much and frequently. Author needs to take basic level writing classes again, this time paying attention in class.
A nice start to what could be a good series.
I think this chapter set-up the characers and the situation in which they live in, which seemed to be believable.
Nicely done and a first time poster. Hope to see a lot more of the author's work.
Thanks for the read.
I can envision one heck of a erotic series here, so I am waiting for the next installment to see where this story goes!
We loved your story. My sons and daughters are naked with me, their naked mother...all of us cumming...thanks. Can't wait for your next installment to this story!
I really hope you will continue this story. I read your other stories they are great just like this one. Thanks