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Three's a Circle, Not a Triangle Ch. 08

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by gperry284304/07/13

It's all in the head,

and you do such a delightful job of getting us in the head of your characters.

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by Alaska8404/08/13

Thank You

Susan, thank you for sharing your stories. Best wishes!

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by stuwatcher5204/17/13

Again - You have our visual imaginations working overtime, Ms. Susan!

I am beginning to both like and feel for William, trapped in a marriage of futility, living in the lust of a vision. At times I wonder what William really sees across the street, is it a clear as our talented author portraying for our fertile minds or does William have the fertile imagination here. What about his wife-somewhere she has to have a part in one of these chapters! Our beautiful Susan, the mirage or vision or temptress across the street, surely someone so beautiful has more satisfaction than her masterbatory pleasures. I often feel our favorite author is providing stimulus for our own views out 'the window' or 'across the street'. Life or maybe I should say one's erotic life is what ever you can make out of it. I'm thoroughly enjoying this series - not only for the sexy scenarios, but the quality writing and how our talented SJP brings the characters along with each chapter, almost like listening to a radio serial-stay tuned, same channel, same time-don't miss it. As I've always felt, in order to give the writer a fair rating, read the chapter or two before this one to get the 'gist' of the story and things will always be clearer. Another 5 star entry, anxious to read on and on... :) The Bird

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