All Comments on 'The Hikers'

by Aunay

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
I want to join this hiking club!

Maybe we could all go camping together next.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Let's go hiking...

I love how detailed they are. I could imagine it was me pinching and twisting her nipples!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Fuck me too!

This was one hot fucking story that got to the fucking point right now!!! My cock was hard as a rock two paragraphs in and stayed that way until I had filled a kleenex with cum twice! This is a fucking hot fuck story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Great buildup

I liked that you put enough backstory in to set up the tension and desire but then still got them naked and on each other quickly. I'd like a bit more detail in your descriptions of the action but overall I came hard by the end and will be back to re-read this one again. Hot.

AunayAunayabout 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the feedback!

I love knowing if, when and exactly how successful I have been at exciting the reader. Keep the details up!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
More

It has been too long since you wrote a story. Please write some more. They are so hot and get me so hard.

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