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Thanks to all my wonderful readers and to everyone who has gone to my website and subscribed! The support has been amazing! Please let me know what you have thought!
Bell
Love the story! One rather large pet peeve though is the writing of the wrong except. You keep writing accept instead of except. Sorry, it just bugged me this chapter.
Very Intriguing
Your story has really grown and improved, but there are still mistakes that make me cringe. I am glad that I stuck with it because this ugly duckling story is slowly becoming a swan! Now I am eager to see how this all turns out!
MORE, MORE, MORE.......Now that I'm caught up here I have to find your website for more.........grrrrrrr. oh well here I go.......
PLEASE tell me Bell isn't going to fall for Clyde or the Officer.
I'll die o_e
WILL THERE BE MORE
tell me this isnt it that there is more coming ? :(
Love it
Can't wait to see what happens
oh more????
oh I do hope there will be more of this story????
Please?
Please finish
Great story, please finish it.
Nooo!
Please continue. You've got me addicted. I have got to know what happens.
Aaaaaaahhh!!!
How can you leave us hanging like this!!???!? I must know what happens next.
Nooooooo
Come back!!!!!! Why did you stop?!?!?????
keep writing
please continue writing O:)
Come on!
Why did you have to be one of those writers that stopped writing, completely ridiculous!
ridiculous writer!!!!!
why did you stopped writing well a good writing is gone waste so I think you are so naive that u wouldn't have read a single comment that we guys posted. I have seen that some writers start posting good novels and they leave us hanging around half way. please I request you to start writing.
Amazing story love the plot line hope u keep writing
The best story I have ever read on this site
Can't wait
Please don't stop. Write more.
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