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Beware What You Wish For Ch. 01

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by 1Martiniman04/08/13

A very nice start!

I enjoyed the opening chapter and I'm hoping for a wonderful story to follow about a loving journey between a husband and a wife. I'm just hoping it doesn't fly off into the cuckold abyss.

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by bullfinch04/12/13

An engaging start.

I am already hooked by this story. More please.

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by Anonymous04/12/13

Miscategorized

This probably should be under the BDSM category and not the Mind Control category. (Unless there's going to be hypnosis or something in a sequel chapter.)

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