How in the hell is she a cheater? It is women-haters like yourself that this story was directed to. Obviously you're going to see the bad in any woman no matter what because no rationale human being could call her a cheater. Sorry you're so fucking stupid.
It's about time that a wife got revenge without having to destroy the marriage. Looks like Phil did learn his lesson.
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Anonymous04/08/13
Agree
I don't like either one, didn't find this erotic at all!
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Anonymous04/08/13
Calm down
Snake didnt say she was a cheater he said she was a self centered cunt. Putting aside HIS cheating which was wrong and her method for dealing with it which was clever sex with her was all about pleasing her. She didnt like anal (but agreed to provide it when she saw how badly he wanted it) and she didnt like oral giving it that is. She thoroughly enjoyed receiving it. If you love someone sometimes you have to put their pleasure ahead of your own and derive your pleasure from giving not getting. Since she didnt she is a self centered cunt. Do you think he would have gone on the site if she had? I dont.
All is well that ends well. Thanks for a great read on the wife's point of view. Looking forward to future submissions.
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Anonymous04/08/13
Whore
Cheating whore, sorry I couldnt resist. You made such a fuss over it. lol
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Anonymous04/08/13
He is a cheating pig
and will always be. Burn him. Cut his balls off. He cares nothing for wedding vows or the loving loyalty of his wife who remains faithful. He is shank whore and nothing else. Revenge and retribution should be his eternal damnation. Throw his shanky ass to the curb. All men like him should burn in hell. It is out duty to see that they do.
Thank you, C, for completing your Hubby's sad saga. Thought he (and you?) might have migrated your writing to Anal just to be shitty!
I really didn't think the original NEEDED a sequel (and still don't) but it IS a good sequel. I like hearing the other PoV when it forwards the story or clarifies things! (Plus, I like it when my guesses pan out!) Having HC be gay was just 'white gravy!'
5*
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Anonymous04/08/13
Sorry Mischief
But if this is based on real life I'm standing by what I said in the original. You're the female version of a cuck, and you don't have the good sense to let him stop cheating on you. He's going to keep cheating because he knows you'll take him back every time. After all, you laid down an ultimatum the first time and he ignored it.
He's a fucking cheating whore and should be burned for it.
As to Snakes, I'll point out that she does indeed give him blow jobs, and it is explicitly stated from the husband's point of view in the original "Delilah-lite" story that while she didn't like to do it, she did it anyway. That's called reciprocation. If you get it, you give it, even if you don't like it. Liking receiving blow jobs doesn't mean you have to like giving them, see?
Snakes454 is a cowardly moron in addition to being fucking stupid.
You are hilarious. Not only are you fucking stupid you are a coward. If you saw me in real life you would realize how ridiculous your comment about bitch slapping me is; you'd pee your pants. The Internet is a great way for cowards like you to pretend you're tough. Ha, ha, ha. I achieved my purpose with this story and comments.. I exposed and aggravated all of women hating stupid fucks! Ha, ha, ha, ha! Do you really think I give a shit what morons rate my story -- a 1 from you would be an honor!
Did the author, who was railing against (some) of the BTB'ers, just give in to them? By having the wife not only not get a revenge fuck in, but also by having her let hubby off the hook (she was with the kids all weekend, they obviously told him about it by Wednesday, if not before). Then, she rewards him by giving up her ass. Shoe on the other foot time: if the roles were reversed, commenters would call the husband a wimp.
If this is all one big sociological experiment in how BTB types react to the gender roles being reversed, it is kind of interesting. But, as a story? I preferred the original's ambiguity.
That is one incredibly forgiving wife-maybe that's where the fantasy lies.
BTTap likely the smartest brave person to read Loving Wives stories
Hey BTTap, you probably are the smartest person brave enough to comment and identify himself/herself. You definitely figured out my motivation and I can't disagree with anything you said in the comment on this story or the original one. I will now check your profile (maybe I should have done that first to at least know if you were male or female) and if you have written any stories will be anxious to read them.
amm, these two stories are a refreshing change of pace within the LW genre. And my personal congratulations for your skill at infuriating the perpetually adolescent trolls who infest this site. I look forward to reading through your listing of posted stories. I hope that you will eventually return to post new stories.
And it makes me laugh, the ball-less annoyingmousies squeaking about belling the hungry tomcat!
Anal penetration is one of the fetishes common to this site. I gotta say it always seemed a rather gay activity. Butt then, in my opinion many, maybe most of the misogynist trolls spewing their hatred are so deep in the closet, I call them spelunkers.
Consider them, they claim that all females are whores, so I guess their own mothers are also whores. Well, since they are so certain, the trolls personal knowledge of their own mothers career choices are better then mine.
I know that I never had any desire to participate in anal sex. The closest would be during cunning-linguistics and only if the anus had been proper sanitized. There are at least two known strains of drug resistant hepatitis and probably other diseases linked to sloppy anal sex.
Then my wife had her own prejudice against anal sex. Her mother and step-father were sexually promiscuous and wildly orgiastic. When he died from a motorcycle accident, she no longer had his protection as she continued her notorious lifestyle. The result eventually left her crippled and suffering severe prolapse of the uterus and rectum. She refused surgery for years. My wife, her daughter, had to stuff them back into her mother when ever they slipped out.
Finally my wife forced her mother to get surgery but with all the other accumulating damage the woman soon afterwards slipped into dementia and was bed-ridden for the remainder of her life. Bitter consequences for thoughtless promiscuity.
I should have read the sequel before I commented on the first chapter. She's obviously a special woman to take him back. Had I done what I suggested after the first chapter, I would have been a sorry loser. Well done.
amm: you wrote two nuanced stories that require contemplation of uncomfortable scenarios. a concept far beyond the nature of the majority of the Lit readers. for them, grammar, punctuation, spelling, story continuity, and content are superfluous. so, don't take it personally when they put fire to their torches, grab their pitchforks, and take to the streets. don't have a stroke because they don't appreciate writing that is not a stroke story.
thanks for the effort.
An interesting turn about on the typical cheating wife/husband story. Although you stretched the realm of plausibility with the chain of events that led to his being discovered I find two things to be unbelievable. One, I think he would have recognized the clothes he purchased for his wife. After all, he must have liked them to buy them in the first place. Once he sees that this is his wife, he simply dumps her, creates a new profile, new name and goes on. Once a cheater, always a cheater applies? And he would have had plenty of time to look at the pictures. Guys in his position have their I-phone handy for this exact thing. They simply take a picture of the screen. I can't tell you how many pictures I've been shown of this very thing. Secondly I think his wife would have divorced him. He's shown her twice what a dog he is. Why stay? And if she doesn't divorce him, he would have divorced her. Something about trust. The kids would have been in High School so the divorce wouldn't have effected them much and he would have been off the alimony/child support loop quickly. Time to move on and find a woman more in line with his sexual requirements. It happens all the time. I surprised either of them didn't divorce the first time he cheated. But the funniest part of this had to be the comments! Nothing like insulting and threatening Anonymous people on the Internet to make for a good laugh! Didn't care for the ending but thanks for the story.
Its the thought with which you submitted this story,that made me like it the most.
Just to spite the perennial woman haters.
However, I do agree with some of the comments,you should have made him feel some of the pain that he had caused her.In fact a lot of pain.Anything except a revenge fuck.
But then,it seems,jealousy & forgiveness are a common trait of female character.
Thanks for sharing.
I might not have stuck around. So...she won't give him bJs or ass, she is on a website for cheaters, he has to go on a website to get someone to do anal with and it is his fault. I don't think so. If she left with some guy I would have gone home and packed it up.
it is an interesting scenario, but would a wife and mother with two kids risk the damage that could have rained down? I myself have a terrible temper and on rare occasions lose all reason for a few minutes. I have never been arrested but must have come close. On those occasions the other is in the wrong and most times I come off second best. Even so the message I send is always received loud and clear and I have never had to repeat myself.
The author has Carolyn going off at the comments about the first chapter but it is one thing to cheat on your spouse and they find out, it is another thing entirely to seek revenge and to humiliate them. The in your face revenge, ramps it up a whole other level. If you slap someone in the face don't be surprised if the reaction you get is hostile. Proverb " Before you embark on a journey of revenge, dig two graves." TK
English
Cheaters deserve each other
That's a cliche and crux of the story.
He cheats, she cheats
No one one to like here. Move along.
Hey snakes 454 and "anonymous"
How in the hell is she a cheater? It is women-haters like yourself that this story was directed to. Obviously you're going to see the bad in any woman no matter what because no rationale human being could call her a cheater. Sorry you're so fucking stupid.
It's about time
It's about time that a wife got revenge without having to destroy the marriage. Looks like Phil did learn his lesson.
Agree
I don't like either one, didn't find this erotic at all!
Calm down
Snake didnt say she was a cheater he said she was a self centered cunt. Putting aside HIS cheating which was wrong and her method for dealing with it which was clever sex with her was all about pleasing her. She didnt like anal (but agreed to provide it when she saw how badly he wanted it) and she didnt like oral giving it that is. She thoroughly enjoyed receiving it. If you love someone sometimes you have to put their pleasure ahead of your own and derive your pleasure from giving not getting. Since she didnt she is a self centered cunt. Do you think he would have gone on the site if she had? I dont.
Author - a little thin-skinned?
Take a chill-pill.
Good Read****
All is well that ends well. Thanks for a great read on the wife's point of view. Looking forward to future submissions.
Whore
Cheating whore, sorry I couldnt resist. You made such a fuss over it. lol
He is a cheating pig
and will always be. Burn him. Cut his balls off. He cares nothing for wedding vows or the loving loyalty of his wife who remains faithful. He is shank whore and nothing else. Revenge and retribution should be his eternal damnation. Throw his shanky ass to the curb. All men like him should burn in hell. It is out duty to see that they do.
Good to see you're still here.
Thank you, C, for completing your Hubby's sad saga. Thought he (and you?) might have migrated your writing to Anal just to be shitty!
I really didn't think the original NEEDED a sequel (and still don't) but it IS a good sequel. I like hearing the other PoV when it forwards the story or clarifies things! (Plus, I like it when my guesses pan out!) Having HC be gay was just 'white gravy!'
5*
Sorry Mischief
But if this is based on real life I'm standing by what I said in the original. You're the female version of a cuck, and you don't have the good sense to let him stop cheating on you. He's going to keep cheating because he knows you'll take him back every time. After all, you laid down an ultimatum the first time and he ignored it.
He's a fucking cheating whore and should be burned for it.
As to Snakes, I'll point out that she does indeed give him blow jobs, and it is explicitly stated from the husband's point of view in the original "Delilah-lite" story that while she didn't like to do it, she did it anyway. That's called reciprocation. If you get it, you give it, even if you don't like it. Liking receiving blow jobs doesn't mean you have to like giving them, see?
Snakes454 is a cowardly moron in addition to being fucking stupid.
You are hilarious. Not only are you fucking stupid you are a coward. If you saw me in real life you would realize how ridiculous your comment about bitch slapping me is; you'd pee your pants. The Internet is a great way for cowards like you to pretend you're tough. Ha, ha, ha. I achieved my purpose with this story and comments.. I exposed and aggravated all of women hating stupid fucks! Ha, ha, ha, ha! Do you really think I give a shit what morons rate my story -- a 1 from you would be an honor!
Ummmm......
Did the author, who was railing against (some) of the BTB'ers, just give in to them? By having the wife not only not get a revenge fuck in, but also by having her let hubby off the hook (she was with the kids all weekend, they obviously told him about it by Wednesday, if not before). Then, she rewards him by giving up her ass. Shoe on the other foot time: if the roles were reversed, commenters would call the husband a wimp.
If this is all one big sociological experiment in how BTB types react to the gender roles being reversed, it is kind of interesting. But, as a story? I preferred the original's ambiguity.
That is one incredibly forgiving wife-maybe that's where the fantasy lies.
BTTap likely the smartest brave person to read Loving Wives stories
Hey BTTap, you probably are the smartest person brave enough to comment and identify himself/herself. You definitely figured out my motivation and I can't disagree with anything you said in the comment on this story or the original one. I will now check your profile (maybe I should have done that first to at least know if you were male or female) and if you have written any stories will be anxious to read them.
My POV
amm, these two stories are a refreshing change of pace within the LW genre. And my personal congratulations for your skill at infuriating the perpetually adolescent trolls who infest this site. I look forward to reading through your listing of posted stories. I hope that you will eventually return to post new stories.
And it makes me laugh, the ball-less annoyingmousies squeaking about belling the hungry tomcat!
Anal penetration is one of the fetishes common to this site. I gotta say it always seemed a rather gay activity. Butt then, in my opinion many, maybe most of the misogynist trolls spewing their hatred are so deep in the closet, I call them spelunkers.
Consider them, they claim that all females are whores, so I guess their own mothers are also whores. Well, since they are so certain, the trolls personal knowledge of their own mothers career choices are better then mine.
I know that I never had any desire to participate in anal sex. The closest would be during cunning-linguistics and only if the anus had been proper sanitized. There are at least two known strains of drug resistant hepatitis and probably other diseases linked to sloppy anal sex.
Then my wife had her own prejudice against anal sex. Her mother and step-father were sexually promiscuous and wildly orgiastic. When he died from a motorcycle accident, she no longer had his protection as she continued her notorious lifestyle. The result eventually left her crippled and suffering severe prolapse of the uterus and rectum. She refused surgery for years. My wife, her daughter, had to stuff them back into her mother when ever they slipped out.
Finally my wife forced her mother to get surgery but with all the other accumulating damage the woman soon afterwards slipped into dementia and was bed-ridden for the remainder of her life. Bitter consequences for thoughtless promiscuity.
hola
I should have read the sequel before I commented on the first chapter. She's obviously a special woman to take him back. Had I done what I suggested after the first chapter, I would have been a sorry loser. Well done.
your expectations are too high
amm: you wrote two nuanced stories that require contemplation of uncomfortable scenarios. a concept far beyond the nature of the majority of the Lit readers. for them, grammar, punctuation, spelling, story continuity, and content are superfluous. so, don't take it personally when they put fire to their torches, grab their pitchforks, and take to the streets. don't have a stroke because they don't appreciate writing that is not a stroke story.
thanks for the effort.
Hollywood ending
Change of pace story, vitriolic comments
An interesting turn about on the typical cheating wife/husband story. Although you stretched the realm of plausibility with the chain of events that led to his being discovered I find two things to be unbelievable. One, I think he would have recognized the clothes he purchased for his wife. After all, he must have liked them to buy them in the first place. Once he sees that this is his wife, he simply dumps her, creates a new profile, new name and goes on. Once a cheater, always a cheater applies? And he would have had plenty of time to look at the pictures. Guys in his position have their I-phone handy for this exact thing. They simply take a picture of the screen. I can't tell you how many pictures I've been shown of this very thing. Secondly I think his wife would have divorced him. He's shown her twice what a dog he is. Why stay? And if she doesn't divorce him, he would have divorced her. Something about trust. The kids would have been in High School so the divorce wouldn't have effected them much and he would have been off the alimony/child support loop quickly. Time to move on and find a woman more in line with his sexual requirements. It happens all the time. I surprised either of them didn't divorce the first time he cheated. But the funniest part of this had to be the comments! Nothing like insulting and threatening Anonymous people on the Internet to make for a good laugh! Didn't care for the ending but thanks for the story.
I gave it a 5.
Its the thought with which you submitted this story,that made me like it the most.
Just to spite the perennial woman haters.
However, I do agree with some of the comments,you should have made him feel some of the pain that he had caused her.In fact a lot of pain.Anything except a revenge fuck.
But then,it seems,jealousy & forgiveness are a common trait of female character.
Thanks for sharing.
Well maybe not!
I might not have stuck around. So...she won't give him bJs or ass, she is on a website for cheaters, he has to go on a website to get someone to do anal with and it is his fault. I don't think so. If she left with some guy I would have gone home and packed it up.
I think
it is an interesting scenario, but would a wife and mother with two kids risk the damage that could have rained down? I myself have a terrible temper and on rare occasions lose all reason for a few minutes. I have never been arrested but must have come close. On those occasions the other is in the wrong and most times I come off second best. Even so the message I send is always received loud and clear and I have never had to repeat myself.
The author has Carolyn going off at the comments about the first chapter but it is one thing to cheat on your spouse and they find out, it is another thing entirely to seek revenge and to humiliate them. The in your face revenge, ramps it up a whole other level. If you slap someone in the face don't be surprised if the reaction you get is hostile. Proverb " Before you embark on a journey of revenge, dig two graves." TK
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