This was one of the best stories that I have read. Short for sure, but good character development and nice pacing. Actually, quite believable and realistic. Please continue the storyline. It has wonderful possibilities.
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Anonymous04/09/13
Absolutely Super
Incredibly realistic! I am from the area you write about, and have been many times to the establishment you mention, and can just picture the wealthy frustrated wives there enjoying their boy toys. Please do continue.....
Excellent Story!
This was one of the best stories that I have read. Short for sure, but good character development and nice pacing. Actually, quite believable and realistic. Please continue the storyline. It has wonderful possibilities.
Absolutely Super
Incredibly realistic! I am from the area you write about, and have been many times to the establishment you mention, and can just picture the wealthy frustrated wives there enjoying their boy toys. Please do continue.....
Fully agreed!
We can't wait for the next story. 5*
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