by shavedkitty23
Up till the last line. It was not needed.
The rest of it read like a real account, not just a fictionalized fantasy. Well done.
Hands down best story I've ever read, PLEASE write a sequel perhaps with some more lesbian action
You paint a very vivid picture in my mind of a very erotic experience.
It could have used a little more editing, but this was still a Very Enjoyable story
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