All Comments on 'My Desire'

Feminismmmm ?!?!??!

I 5-ed .

You appear to have lost the refinement and precision of your earlier pieces and seem to have overextended yourself. S.O.

Of course, it is prose, and there is really no "option" for prose, so it went under poetry, as it is not story with a substantial plot. While, of course, it is not refined, by any means, I wonder to which "earlier" pieces you are referring, exactly, seeing as I have only submitted one preceding this. I have been writing for years, but I am very new to writing erotic prose/poetry, so I'm open to constructive criticism. It's more about the art of it, for me, and the presentation than bringing to, ahem, culmination. I have no desire to write full-blown pieces.

Truth be told, this was a private correspondence... a rather steamy exchange, in any event.

It's damn good writing and a lovely sensual read.

Thanks for sharing..... A delicious journey no matter what the form or format...

after reading this