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by Anonymous

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by energystar04/09/13

Great old fansion thiller

Thanks you.

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by Anonymous04/10/13

Gah! another short chapter, but i love it.

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by Anonymous04/10/13

Very Good Read...

... the only constructive criticism I would give is to not rush your submissions. I feel like the story thus far could have been more better divided into two or even one chapter. This might help hold your readership and, through development, build more suspense.

4/5

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