I don't like all of them kissing Steve on the lips. I thinking lip kissing is more intimate then friendly.
It would be cool if Amber used the guys from the football team to model her future designs.
Thank you for sharing. I have really enjoyed reading it. Keep writing.
You've put together a very good story. Thanks for writing it and sharing it with us.
I wasn't going to comment as I have on your other parts, but really this is such fun to read. Thank you for writing it.
Losing your father that way is a heavy blow for young man. The girls are going to have to formally adopt Steve, and then none of them can marry him.........
Truly we have superheroes here.
What is the deal with Literotica writers, and the gratuitous promotion of the American military? What purpose does it serve in a Love story?
I'm a Black American, born during America's Racial Apartheid era (Jim Crow). I know for a fact that the only people that non-White Americans have ever had to fight for freedom and justice, is White Americans. My father was career military. It is necessary to remind him of the struggle of Black Americans, against White Americans, every time he starts spouting off about "defeating communism". He promptly "shuts the hell up". He's reluctant to admit that he "sold his soul to the devil" for a better way of life for him and his family. I can acknowledge the sacrifice of his soul, without praising the evil that he served. After all, there weren't a whole lot of economic opportunities for a Black man, coming of age in the 1950's. But then I could say the same for the drug dealers in my generation. But the drug addicts are vitims of their own choice. The same can not be said for the victims of the US military. The victims of the US military, are victims of American selfishness, greed, ego, and savagery.
The US military has never fought for the freedom of Americans. Unless by freedom you use the definition of the US Confederate states. They defined freedom as the freeedom to oppress other humans.
The US military has always fought for the right of Americans to exploit the land, resources and cheap labor of other countries. They are nothing more than predators and thugs. They have eschewed the most basic of human morality. They have agreed to kill others, because someone in authority asked them to.
You seem to conveniently forget, that the soldiers in your story have invaded and occupied someone elses land. They are NOT defending Americans on American soil. Who exactly is the terrorist?
That is NOT to say that the Taliban are "nice" people. Religious conservatives are hardly ever "nice" people, whether they are Muslim, Jewish, Hindu or Christian. And as a Black American, I can say unequivically, that if evil needs a poster child, White Christian Americans would serve the function quite well.
It should surprise no one, that Americans have yet to become civilized. The US founding fathers were rapist, murders, and child traffickers. And Americans have yet to understand that they were bad people. I think that is mainly because White Americans don't care about harm committed by White people on non-White people. But why are the proponents of the military, so carefully clustered among the authors on Literotica?
If it had not been for us career military guys, you might be speaking German or Japanese right now.
As to the stories here and their themes, if you don't like (or understand) them, why read them?
It sounds like you are quite resentful. Instead of downplaying your father's commitment to his country, you should be thanking him. You obviously are the one that needs to "shut the hell up" and get some perspective. By the tone of your post you seem to hate this country but what's your alternative? Europe? Mexico? Maybe Africa? You think you'd find half the opportunities there that you have here? Think again. You ever been to Africa? Not a good place to live let alone grow up in. You think you struggled as a Black American but the truth is you don't know what struggle really is till you've lived there. Your worst experience in your lifetime here in the USA is still a thousand times better than your race is living with over there every day. Go ahead, hate America and hate White people. Your father paid with blood, sweat and tears so you can do that. If you tried hating the establishment over there, you'd be dead right now.
My question is, what explains the "military fetish" of LW writers. If the writers put a warning at the beginning of the story, that it contains gratuitous military ass kissing, I would not read the story.
The only people Black Americans have ever had to fight for freedom and justice, is White Americans. The military fought for the freedom of white folks in Europe. But Black folks were enduring legalized racial apartheid here in America, while America was fighting in Europe. If the military had been killing White people here in America, I might have more respect for them. My father spouts your same bullshit, until I point out that it has no basis in fact. Communists didn't come up with genocide committed against Native American's, Slavery of African Americans, or Jim Crow. The evil that needs to be defeated here in America, has nothing to do with Communism. And in most cases around the world, communism and non-christian religious extremism (in non-white countries), is a direct backlash against European/American
raping and pillaging.
I grew up with my father's so called "comrades in arms". They were a savage ruthless people. I'm surprised he trusted them enough to turn his back on them. But he sold his soul for a better way of life. He doesn't like to be reminded that he was the butt-boy of the people that were oppressing his friends and family. He didn't serve the supposed ideals of this country. But then again this country has never paid more than lip service to those ideals. What he did was serve capitalism and the people who steal the resources of other countries around the world. That's the real reason that Japan attacked Pearl Harbor. And regardless of how you have been mislead, many US corporations and White Americans supported the Nazis. And yes Americans make sure that they make everyone else's life miserable around the world, so that they can steal and waste everyone else's resources.
But all of that is beside the point. Can't you sociopaths understand that the foreigners in question, are fighting for their own country, on their own soil. If that is what our military was doing, I would honor them and hopefully assist them. Can't you people tell a "love story", without glorifying the murder of others in their own country. You are truly a sick people.
My question is who gives a fuck what your sorry ass think?
If the authors simply said, "this story contains gratuitous military ass kissing", I would skip the story. This may not be obvious to some you morons, but I can't retro-actively skip the stories. And, it is not that I don't understand the stories. I don't understand the motivation for the insinuation of the militaristic bullshit in what is otherwise a quite touching love story.
I also asked why you predators and thugs believe that the "military serves this country". Why would anyone believe that a bunch of people who volunteer to go kill people that have done nothing to America, are somehow honorable or decent. They are either exceptionally stupid, or they are just thugs.
That is not to say the Taliban are good people. They are religious conservatives. Most, if not all religious conservatives, whether christian, jewish, or muslim, are bad people. (America certainly has more than it's share of religious conservatives) But if you want to fight the people who are doing bad things to Americans, they are right here in the good ol' US of A.
And, if you don't like what I have to say, you can simply skip my comments. I do not post as "Anonymous".
From the author's foreword in Chapter 1: "If Navy Seals, football stars, surgeons, glamorous actors and models, and honest politicians destroy your ability to suspend disbelief; this story may not be for you."
Since you failed to heed the warning from the onset of the story that would lead me to believe that (a) no warning would have sufficed since you either can not comprehend a warning; or (b) you intentionally ignored the warning in order to get some gratification by agitating some truly stupid comments.
What about my comments was "stupid" or "inaccurate"?
And "destroy your ability to suspend disbelief" is certainly not the same as "contains gratuitous military ass-kissing".
I'm not American i'm Irish but you clearly a close minded, delusional, self righteous idiot. History can show you that without a standing army your easy taking for the next power monger that comes along and a sharp blade is of more use than a dull one. If in keeping their army in combat condition they decide to help impoverished countries by taking out the real scum or "thugs" as you would say then they have my blessing despite whatever backroom deals go on, but again that's polotics not a soldiers lot.
I'm sorry but everyone kissing EVERYONE is too much, the dialogue is stilted and NO teenager would talk that way. 1*
Soldiers don't get to decide who to fight that's not there job. I know a lot of soldiers none of the ones I know like killing. If they never had to fire a weapon in anger it would be fine with them. Yes there are plenty of people here in America who need taken care of but I can guarantee you don't want the military to do it. The military is a tool in the tool belt of the President. Country's without strong military's don't have as much leverage at the international level. One of the biggest problems recently is that soldiers are being used as cops. Soldiers make lousy cops they aren't trained as cops so when they are used as cops FUBAR happens. If the war is unjust blame it on the people who sent them blame it on the bosses not on the workers.
I love all of it and wish readers just vote if the story doesn't appeal to them. Why say anything if you can't say something good? Ron R Wood OldMarineVet
bad story, bad dialogue, bad plot, lot of holes. and way beyond suspension of disbelief.
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