All Comments on 'May to December Earth Day Romance'

by JuanVato

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perseygoddessperseygoddessalmost 11 years ago
Petered off a little at the end

I think it could have used more of a closing but great story

YDB95YDB95almost 11 years ago
Great job

Nice setting, good characterization, and the sex was well-presented. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Can't say this is the best contest story I have read.

Mind you this is the only one i have read. I will read some more then say this is the best.

I loved the idea didn't love the immature writing style till I realised this was a young teens' narration.

I hope there will be more.

Thank you.

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