by JuanVato
I think it could have used more of a closing but great story
Nice setting, good characterization, and the sex was well-presented. Keep it up!
Mind you this is the only one i have read. I will read some more then say this is the best.
I loved the idea didn't love the immature writing style till I realised this was a young teens' narration.
I hope there will be more.
Thank you.