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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/11/13

loved it

that first time is such a mixture of feelings and sensations, but, when you realize that you have taken that monster into your tight little hole that feeling of pride begins to set in, and then the yearning to do it again, and it never leaves you. It is 50yrs since my first one and I would love another right now. Cheers.

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by Anonymous04/11/13

Wow!

Great story, loved the build up, hope there's another chapter...

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by adjoaq04/11/13

booyah!

you're too much! loved it.

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by nanobot04/12/13

Better and better

The easy style and naivete make this story sweet and sexy. Very like Stephen King in his early days. Love your wrap up in the end transforming this from an anecdote to a provocative glimpse into the future.

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