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by KYCunnilinguist
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twelveooneabout 11 years agoI think the anon
is funnin with you
the question is
Will our lips ever move to breach the space between them?
and the answer is springtime explodes
interesting
I didn't vote not being a fan of block o'text , and i'm not sure about the approach here
HarryHillabout 11 years agoI agree ...there's a good poem hidden here
Why can't I get you out of my head?
What compels ...such feelings at the mere thought of you?
Why does my heart betray my mind(,)
ache so badly(,) so profoundly ..terrible for you
..
just a suggestion 5ed
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