that was one of the best stories ive read! keep them coming!
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Anonymous04/11/13
Amazing
I cannot tell you how often I fantasized about this in my late teens and early 20's. I spent a lot of time babysitting back then babysitting for one very attractive man, fantasizing about fucking him... Too bad he was married.
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Anonymous04/12/13
EXCELLENT STORY
goldeniangel you call yourself!!! and you are!!! i have had a real life experience very similar to this in a land far away -- india!!! i can relate to the story. the conversational part was good wish it went on a little more. i certainly hope for all the readers that there is a part 2 dinner and thereafter. if you do write it then be more conversational and tease the reader to want more. excellent story overall!!! all the very best
Once again Angel you have out done yourself. And once again you make a quickie story so much more that I go to sleep with dreams of what's going to happen next. And I love the break from the BDSM as much as I love it. And your brilliant at writing it, there is something refreshing about a good old fuck story
Your story was very good and on a topic that is a fantasy for many. I can tell you used a spell checker on it, but there are still some errors that it wouldn't catch. Words spelled correctly but not the one you wanted "on" instead of "one", "untended" instead of "unintended" etc. While minor in nature it takes a way from your story and breaks the flow if the reader notices them.
Having someone else read it prior to publishing would eliminate a lot of this.
Just delicious honey. You've done it again. I needed a good short, and you came through just in the nick of time. Crammed schedule lately, but I still needed my fix. Thank you again! Sequel?
I'm probably not going to write a sequel to this one... I'm pretty happy where Rich and Dana ended up and in my head they're off Happily Ever After. Since I'm involved in a pretty heavy series right now (Marriage Training), I'll be writing stand-alone stories to clear my head every now and then but expanding upon them is doubtful for the moment. Possibly sometime in the future... but don't get too hopeful cuz there's a LOT of things that I want to write.
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Anonymous12/05/13
So good!
This is so hot! I wish this had happened to me back in my babysitting days. I'll be thrilled if you ever write a sequel, but I agree that the story ends with the characters in a really nice place. I have a feeling I'll spend the rest of the afternoon thinking about what happens next. Thanks for another great read!!
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Anonymous10/07/14
why not me?
I wouldn't mind dating that sitter. As long as I get to fuck her for a night cap
English
Short but oh soooo hot!
more please about Rick and Dana. I'd like to see their relationship grow.
more
that was one of the best stories ive read! keep them coming!
Amazing
I cannot tell you how often I fantasized about this in my late teens and early 20's. I spent a lot of time babysitting back then babysitting for one very attractive man, fantasizing about fucking him... Too bad he was married.
EXCELLENT STORY
goldeniangel you call yourself!!! and you are!!! i have had a real life experience very similar to this in a land far away -- india!!! i can relate to the story. the conversational part was good wish it went on a little more. i certainly hope for all the readers that there is a part 2 dinner and thereafter. if you do write it then be more conversational and tease the reader to want more. excellent story overall!!! all the very best
Quickie that leaves you wanting more
Once again Angel you have out done yourself. And once again you make a quickie story so much more that I go to sleep with dreams of what's going to happen next. And I love the break from the BDSM as much as I love it. And your brilliant at writing it, there is something refreshing about a good old fuck story
Good Story.... but
Your story was very good and on a topic that is a fantasy for many. I can tell you used a spell checker on it, but there are still some errors that it wouldn't catch. Words spelled correctly but not the one you wanted "on" instead of "one", "untended" instead of "unintended" etc. While minor in nature it takes a way from your story and breaks the flow if the reader notices them.
Having someone else read it prior to publishing would eliminate a lot of this.
Amazing!
The writing wasn't amazingly good - plenty good enough, though - but it had a NEW PLOT TWIST - so rare, so absolutely rare
Just delicious
Just delicious honey. You've done it again. I needed a good short, and you came through just in the nick of time. Crammed schedule lately, but I still needed my fix. Thank you again! Sequel?
Probably no sequel to this - sorry everyone!
I'm probably not going to write a sequel to this one... I'm pretty happy where Rich and Dana ended up and in my head they're off Happily Ever After. Since I'm involved in a pretty heavy series right now (Marriage Training), I'll be writing stand-alone stories to clear my head every now and then but expanding upon them is doubtful for the moment. Possibly sometime in the future... but don't get too hopeful cuz there's a LOT of things that I want to write.
So good!
This is so hot! I wish this had happened to me back in my babysitting days. I'll be thrilled if you ever write a sequel, but I agree that the story ends with the characters in a really nice place. I have a feeling I'll spend the rest of the afternoon thinking about what happens next. Thanks for another great read!!
why not me?
I wouldn't mind dating that sitter. As long as I get to fuck her for a night cap
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