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I was expecting werewolf or vampire or something like that in nonhuman, maybe this belonged in sci-fi?
Well, I'd certainly say he is none human....
Nice first ficlet and an interesting idea. Some sentence structure issues an editor or beta reader could help correct. Writing is like exercise, the more you do the stronger you get. Too bad it's over. We greedy readers always want to know what happened next?
wow
...tell me there is more coming?
MORE, PLEASE?
It has a great setup. And I know its not traditional, but I'm delighted in a happy story. I could really lose myself in them, seeing them come together formally, the baby, its a sweet story. You write so well. I love all of your storylines so far! Keep it up, pretty please? Hugs and best wishes!
Great story
Yes wow
Please write more pleeaasseeee
Hmm
That was a fairly good read. About the only thing I'd change would be that Cathy hadn't quit and that Laura intended to punch her in the face when she got back to the office (I'm such an onery cuss)
Great story.
I loved your story. Please continue to write more.
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