All Comments on 'The Stepfather and The Bribers Ch. 03'

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MacD7MacD7about 11 years ago

This chapter is amazing, so hot!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Doing so well my dear...

What a delightful story. Darling, I love the characters and the action, perhaps you could write a bit longer chapter next time... I barely get going and its already over... I'm not one to find a quick release.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
This was so hot that...

I came before I read the end. I was planning on reading a few stories before bed but this was so sexy I had to finger my pussy, I was reading each paragraph 5 times,extending my pleasure. I'm sill dizzy, I came so flipping hard so thank you you're a great writer, love the Cameron character viewpoint

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

I can't believe how hot this was. You have to write longer chapters, and please include her stepfather. The brothers are perfect but theres nothing better then an experienced man.

Thanks a lot for writing this !

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I write stories that I find to be fantasy worthy. I guarantee that every story I've written, I've thoroughly enjoyed myself before posting. ;)

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