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by Anonymous

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by LeBroz12/17/06

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Look at all that W is missing!
{Even when awake?}

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by duddle14601/20/07

Lovely

This poem has an almost mystical quality ~ a beautiful effort.

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by BikeNut04/14/07

Quirky

Seems an odd and quirky piece ... water?

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by Amyfriend11/02/08

Very nice.

It certainly leaves food for thought and makes one think.

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